task 4 A

My hero..

He is less talk

He is angry for sometimes

In his silent..

He is so care to his wife and children.

He is so discipline when he teach his childen.

He alwyas there everytime..

Everytime when I got many problems.

He is my hero...

My hero who never give up for everything.

Everything for all about his children.

His tears that ever I saw,

That his feel how he love his children.

He always be my hero....

 I Love you dadJ

task 3 - toefl

NAMA                  : EVI NUR PADILLAH

NPM                     : 18611504

KELAS                  : 4SA01

SOAL  A

5. Not only her parents but also her brother and sister lives in New York.

A                           B               C                       D

Answer  : D. live

SOAL B

10. Our friends might stopped to see us on their way to California.

     A          B      C   D

Answer : C. in

SOAL C

4.            Tom and her sister studies biology last year, and so does Jean.

                                A             B                   C                         D

Answer : B. study

task 2- Direct sentence

'Instagram for doctors' to be launched in Europe

By Zoe KleinmanTechnology reporter, BBC News

An app which enables healthcare professionals to share photos is to be rolled out across western Europe by the end of the year.

The app was designed to enable doctors to share pictures of their patients, both with each other and with medical students. So far, more than 150,000 doctors have uploaded case photos with the patient's identity obscured. However, some experts have expressed concern about patient confidentiality. Patients' faces are automatically obscured by the app but users must manually block identifying marks like tattoos. Each photo is reviewed by moderators before it is added to the database.

No secrets

Founder Dr Josh Landy told the BBC that the Figure 1 service did not access any patient records.

"We do not possess any personal medical data at all. The best way to keep a secret is not to have it. We are not an organisation that delivers healthcare," he told the BBC.

But doctors must provide identifying credentials and are also advised to notify their employees and patients to find out about consent policies.

"Legally, we found that identifying the doctor does not identify the patient," said Dr Landy.

"However some [medical] conditions are so rare that they can't be posted. One user wanted to post something but there are only seven cases of it in the US and they had all been reportable because they are rare, so the patient could have been identified."

Anybody can download the app for free, but only verified healthcare professionals can upload photos or comment on them, he added.

'Colourful'

"We reject sensationalistic images," said Dr Landy.

"Everything is there for educational purposes. That said, there are very colourful images - things medics see every day. It's a transparent view into a world you rarely get to see."

The app is already available in North America, the UK and Ireland.

While digital services such as UpToDate and DynaMed - both requiring a subscription - are already widely used within the healthcare community as clinical knowledge databases, they are not rivals to Figure 1, said Dr Landy.

  "UpToDate is an app I love, and have used for years. However, they have a highly curated repository of articles written and edited by experts in the field.

"What our app does is provide the opportunity to contribute any case no matter how classic or unusual. Ours is all image-based and totally crowdsourced."

The app has received $6m (£3.75m) in investment in the last year.

British GP and author Dr Ellie Cannon gave it a cautious welcome.

"I think it's potentially really useful to share photos with medical students and other doctors," she said.

"Obviously the potential pitfall is the confidentiality. Of course, they are anonymised but even uploading from a certain doctor may go some way to identify a patient," she added.

"And can a patient later opt out? We've seen with other sites the downsides of sharing too much."

Sumber : http://www.bbc.com/news/technology-29521986

    7 October 2014 Last updated at 15:

Direct sentence

"We do not possess any personal medical data at all. The best way to keep a secret is not to have it. We are not an organisation that delivers healthcare," he told the BBC.

"Obviously the potential pitfall is the confidentiality. Of course, they are anonymised but even uploading from a certain doctor may go some way to identify a patient," she added.

task 1- indirect sentence

Nama : Evi Nur Padillah

Npm   : 18611504

Kelas  : 4SA01

 

 

indirect sentence

 "We do not possess any personal medical data at all. The best way to keep a secret is not to have it. We are not an organisation that delivers healthcare," he told the BBC.

 "Obviously the potential pitfall is the confidentiality. Of course, they are anonymised but even uploading from a certain doctor may go some way to identify a patient," she added.

1.       He told the BBC that we have not possessed any personal medical data at all. The best way to keep a secret was not to had it. We were not an organisation that delivers healthcare.  

2.       She added that obviously the potential pitfall was  the confidentiality. Of course, they were anonymised but even uploading from a certain doctor may go some way to identify a patient.

business communication

Business Communication

a.          Definiton

Business communication is communication that promotes a product, service, marketing, or organization; relays information within a business; or functions as an official statement from a company.

b.         Effective business communication

Ø Face-to-face

      Face-to-face communication helps to establish a personal connection and will help sell the product or service to the customer. Information is easier to access and delivered immediately with these interactions rather than waiting for an email or phone call.

Ø Email

         When using email to communicate in the business world, it is important to be careful how things are worded. Miscommunication is very frequent as the reader doesn’t know what non-verbal cues you are giving off, such as the pitch, tone, or expressions.

Ø  Telephone

         When making a business call make it clear who you are and where you are from as well as your message when on the phone.

Ø Memorandum

         Memorandums are straight to the point and used within a company to communicate information to individuals or departments.  

Short conversation

How I start my veil business

Agustini : Hey, Evi ! Long time no see! And now your veil business has gone into a great success. Its a wonderful

Evi                         : Thank you, Agustini. I’m still trying as best as I can to satisfy every customer.

Agustini : Wow. Can you tell me the story of your success, Evi?

Evi                         : Well, before my business goes this big, I also experienced hard times. At the first time starting out my veil, the place where I made the veil  was in my house . I did everything by myself. I made design of veil, I chose kind of cloth, I sewed the veil, I marketed my veil to my friends in the college and my neighbours. I tried my best to satisfy people and make them love my veils.

Agustini : And then… what happened next?

Evi                         : Over time, many people began to like my veils. Seeing that opportunity, with adequate fund of bank loan and driven by strong will, I decided to build and open up my own veil store. It wasn’t still a large veil store.

Agustini : Did many people come to buy right after you opened the veil store?

Evi                         : It was like I needed to start over again. I had to introduce my new-open veil store to people once more. I made brochures and leaflets to get people know my veil and I also marketed my veil by internet in social media like facebook, instagram, online shop and so on. Finally, people started to come over my veil store. My veil customers then increased in number by the help of mouth-to-mouth promotions. That was how my marketing strategy worked.

Agustini : Wow, weren’t you overwhelmed to handle those customers all by yourself?

Evi                         : Of course, I had trouble to meet customer’s demands. Therefore, I decided to employ workers to work on my veil store. I started out employing 10 workers; 8 workers to work with me making design of veil and sew , and the rest became cashier and salesclerk that serve customers.

Agustini : Do you need more workers then?

Evi                         : Of course, my scale of production was getting massive over time. Therefore, I started to employ more workers, enlarge and trim up my veils store, enhance my business strategy until today.

Agustini : What do you consider as the most important thing in running your veil business?

Evi                         : Definitely, costumer’s satisfaction. I wouldn’t have run my business smoothly if I belittled customer’s satisfaction. One satisfaction of a customer is enough to attract other customers to come.

Agustini : That’s great, Evi. Thank you for sharing. I wish your story can be helpful for me someday.

Evi                         : You’re welcome, Agustini. 

Application letter

Mr. Fauzi Rachman
Zambrud Company
32 Ahmad Yani Road
Bandung

June 15, 2014

Dear Mr. Fauzi

I submitted a letter of application and a resume earlier this month for the programmer position advertised in the Times Union. To date, I have not heard from your office. I would like to confirm receipt of my application and reiterate my interest in the job.

I am very interested in working at Zambrud Company and I believe my skills and experience would be an ideal match for this position.

If necessary, I would be glad to resend my application materials or to provide any further information you might need regarding my candidacy. I can be reached at 081295098572 or evinurpadillah@gmail.com . I look forward to hearing from you.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely,

Evi Nur Padillah